Classwork1. AWL Sublist 3B Review: Use as many words as possible from this list to describe an experiment involving food. Include your research question and expected outcome. Also include information about the subjects (the people who will participate in the research) and your method. Study the example below:
- Research Question: Is there an interaction between protein and university students' ability to concentrate?
- Subjects: male and female college students, ages 20 to 25, include minorities
- Method: Create two groups with specific diets. The experimental group will eat a diet with a high proportion of protein. The control group's diet will have a higher proportion of carbohydrates. Then I will give each group a task that requires concentration. For example, I might ask them to memorize a sequence of numbers. I will then compare the results.
- Expected Outcome: I anticipate a positive relationship between protein consumption and students' ability to concentrate.
2. Revisions for Task 5 Draft 2
- Less/fewer: Less is for non-count nouns (less poverty, less public transportation). Fewer is for count nouns (fewer hospitals, fewer cars).
- Articles: When you refer to our planet and our moon, you use the article the. (The moon orbits the earth.) When you refer to space, you use no article. (The rocket flew through space.)
- Also see the Collocations tab in our class Google Document.
3. Grammar: In parallel structures, you need to include only the new information. In other words, you need to remove (eliminate) unnecessary repetition (redundancy). For example, in the sentence Children can receive easy assignments, such as setting the table, doing the dishes, making their beds, and they can even take out the trash, you can remove they can. You don't need to repeat it. You also need to make take out a gerund. The sentence is better as Children can receive easy assignments, such as setting the table, doing the dishes, making their beds, and taking out the trash.
Homework
Make revisions for Draft 2 of Task 5 (2/23, Basic Needs vs. Outer Space).
Complete the yellow handout on eliminating redundancy.
Prepare for Monday's spelling test.
Sign up for a time to take the 30-minute essay test tomorrow (Friday, 3/4).