This sentence is not parallel. Revise it: Government should use more money for improving public transportation in terms of traffic jams, environmental, and people who need help.
Study these more academic vocabulary items: potholes for holes in the road, allocate funds or invest funds in for spend more money on, asphalt for road, poor conditions for bad conditions.
Don't use public transport but public transportation.
Task 6, Draft 1 (3/1): Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Homework
Task 4, Draft 2 (2/22): Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways or public transportation? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
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