Tuesday, April 5, 2011

Tuesday, 4/5

Classwork
  • Finished grading articles test. Discussed any questions.
  • Reviewed 30-minute essays. First weaknesses: Length. Essays should be about 350 words. Our class average is 326. You can add general information in the introduction, a quote or common situation for a hook. If you are a thesis, you should definitely add one. In the body paragraphs, you should add a topic sentence if you don't have one. You can also add details (see handout for ideas). For the conclusion, you can return to the ideas in the introduction and comment on them.
  • Discussed brainstorming ideas in groups. Main consensus: Take 3 to 5 minutes at the beginning to do it. It really does help.
Homework
  • For your 30-minute essay, type a second draft that is at least 350 words. Use the ideas above and the handout to add more information. Staple it to your first draft.
  • Task 6 Draft 2 (3/1)

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